what’s YouTube for?
what can you use it for?
Does it connectpeople?
Does it
break
them
apart?
What’s the big “BAM”,
Is it when you realize that you don’t need that?
Is it the moment when you are really alone,
without anyone?
Without anyone on your side, while you are watching the rain falling on your window late at night, (?)
with the sky crying?
What’s YouTube actually for?
Isitmadetobringpeoplecloser?
or to break
people apart?
This poem was written Monday morning after a very long weekend studying Math and Spanish for the end of the year exams, while the rain never stopped falling and falling from Friday afternoon until Monday night.
Please comment below your thoughts about my poem!! :))) <3
Hi Zizel Angelidou,
ReplyDeleteGreat poem, I can see you put effort into it!
Keep up the good work :)
Zizel, this is a very good poem and sadly speaks the truth as many teenagers spend too much time on youtube instead of going outside! I like how you used different elements, such as when you said "to connect people", you connected the words, and when you said "break them apart" you wrote them on separate lines to show the action of breaking apart. I really liked the poem, keep it up!
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